A gentle breeze
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A gentle breeze
A gentle breeze,
is all it takes,
A wave of salt,
is all you need.
Nature, unaltered, unchanged,
the way it was meant to be.
Aloha from Apparition, your newest ghost leaving his footprint. I thought I'd open with a cheesy poem, and I seem to have succeeded. I've been roleplaying for what seems like an eternity, but has actually been a year and a half. I like to consider myself an adapt writer, although I'm not fond of making large walls of text. At any rate, I say hello, you say hello back. Chop chop.
is all it takes,
A wave of salt,
is all you need.
Nature, unaltered, unchanged,
the way it was meant to be.
Aloha from Apparition, your newest ghost leaving his footprint. I thought I'd open with a cheesy poem, and I seem to have succeeded. I've been roleplaying for what seems like an eternity, but has actually been a year and a half. I like to consider myself an adapt writer, although I'm not fond of making large walls of text. At any rate, I say hello, you say hello back. Chop chop.
Apparition- Mist

- Join date: 2010-01-08

Posts: 1
Age: 17
Re: A gentle breeze
Welcome to FoG, Apparition.
I'm not as adept with poetry as I am with prose, and it is true that I enjoy prose a great deal more than poetry. However, I do occasionally enjoy poems whether they're cheesy or not.
I hope you enjoy your stay. FoG is definitely a great place to grow as a writer and as a role player.
I'm not as adept with poetry as I am with prose, and it is true that I enjoy prose a great deal more than poetry. However, I do occasionally enjoy poems whether they're cheesy or not.
I hope you enjoy your stay. FoG is definitely a great place to grow as a writer and as a role player.

Kathryn Lacey- ★ Administrator ★

- Join date: 2009-05-27

Posts: 6439
Age: 22
Location: Utah
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Re: A gentle breeze
Welcome to FoG! If you are looking to improve your writing skills or have fun with awesome RPs then you have came to the right place. Anyway I will see you around and I hope you enjoy your stay.
Re: A gentle breeze
It's seems you're also quite adept at subtlety, Kathryn. I do that too, if you were doing what I think you were doing (spelling 'adept' correctly). ^^
Welcome to the FOG, Apparition!
I'm looking forward to seeing your role-playing skills, and observing your development as a writer/poet! You've certainly come to the right place to wield and hone your skills. 
If you ever have any questions, please ask, because we'll all be right there to answer. ^^ Enjoy your new adventure amid the swirly mists!
Welcome to the FOG, Apparition!

If you ever have any questions, please ask, because we'll all be right there to answer. ^^ Enjoy your new adventure amid the swirly mists!
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Age: 23
Location: near Seattle, Washington
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Re: A gentle breeze
((hahahah I figured I'd take a break from my usual, painful bluntness. You were spot on about my motivation. ^o_~^))

Kathryn Lacey- ★ Administrator ★

- Join date: 2009-05-27

Posts: 6439
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